The bar chart illustrates the number of production and consumption of electricity in ten countries in 2014. At first glance, it is clear that the number is ordered by rank.
Among ten countries, China is the highest in both production and consumption, with the amount of 5398 billion kWh for production and 5322 billion kWh for consumption. Following China, on the 2nd rank is United States, that produces 4099 billion kWh electricity and consumes 3866 billion kWh electricity. Furthermore, the inhabitants in Russia produce 1057 billion kWh electricity and consume 1038 billion kWh electricity, making Russia stands on the 3rd rank. The next is Japan, where the citizens consume 856.7 billion kWh electricity and also produce 936.2 billion kWh electricity that makes Japan is on the 4th position. After Japan is India, where the number of production is 871 billion kWh and the number of consumption is 698.8 billion kWh. On 6th rank is Canada, where the production of electricity is 618.9 billion kWh and the consumption is 499.9 billion kWh. France is on 7th rank, where the country produces 561.2 billion kWh electricity and consumes 462.9 billion electricity. Following Canada, there is Brazil with 530.7 billion kWh in electricity production and 455.8 billion kWh in electricity consumption. Germany is on 9th rank, with the production of electricity is 526.6 billion kWh and the consumption is 582.6 billion kWh. The last is Korea. Rep, where the citizens produce 485.1 billion kWh electricity and consume 449.5 billion kWh electricity.
In conclusion, China is the highest in both production and consumption of electricity, where Korea. Rep is the lowest in both production and consumption of electricity. The number of electricity is measured in billion kWh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...he number of electricity is measured in billion kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26501766784 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97761840065 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.367491166078 0.547539520022 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6379573476 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139111797195 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898051212515 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777336891237 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158640271027 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666400956954 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.