Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often a dichotomy that whether young children live alone or stay with family. Some parents believe that youngsters will be benefited, if they live away from home, others maintain that it is better to live with family. This essay will discuss both arguments and then state why it is beneficial for living alone.
On the one hand, many parents argue that living away from home is better for young ones. The obvious reason is that if a young person lives independently, he will have opportunities to learn new skills and in turn these would help him improve as an individual. In fact, youngsters living apart are frequently confronted with the challenges. Thus, they are offered with chances to leash and exploit their hidden talent. For instance, time and money management skills are acquired by some children living in hostels or overseas. Hence, they will become more confident and mature as compared to the children of their same age.
On the other hand, some parents argue that living with families is far better off than alone for youngsters. The main stay is that family ties will save the child from emotional instability and disorientation in the events of hardships. A young person living with family enjoys connectivity and support from his elders, which in turn is significant for his physical and mental growth. In addition to it, the guidance of parents on every single matter is imperative for a child. Parents and elder in family are much more experienced in life and they could educate young ones to differentiate between good and bad pursuits. Hence, it is likely that youngsters living with families will be emotionally stronger and will not be mislead.
In conclusion, I believe that youth should be encouraged to live without family, as they will learn useful skills and become confident which will reward them upon reaching adulthood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99679487179 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58712222942 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8226899201 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196262342189 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722796867741 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522250691135 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138628939033 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385151409551 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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