You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Rona Lyn Olivar, a regular customer of your Cozy Place Restaurant, writing to complain about the sickening meals and desserts we were served last Sunday. I am hoping that you would maintain your food standard and probe into the event that ruined our evening.
I, along with my husband and children, went to your restaurant at around 7:00 o'clock on 27th July to celebrate my husband's promotion in office. It was supposed to be a happy and memorable night because we were commemorating a special event as a family in one of our favourite restaurants. But we have had a frustrating experience.
We ordered lamb steak, spuds and toasted sandwiches as our main course, but the steak was salty, raw and hard. On top of that, our sandwiches were served cold! Though we complained about our food to the waitress, she did not mind us and instead told us to complain to the manager. The ice-cream that we ordered came without any marshmallow and strawberry on top, despite their mention in the menu. This was utterly annoying.
I demand a full refund that I paid for the meal and your steps towards making your staff behaviour more professional and cordial. Otherwise, consider me as a lost customer.
I look forward to your immediate response regarding this.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o the event that ruined our evening. I, along with my husband and children, we...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... went to your restaurant at around 7:00 oclock on 27th July to celebrate my husbands p...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86607142857 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69423988751 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674107142857 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4795210487 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205563853479 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571162977469 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513666876495 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959866465203 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549483675905 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.