Governments should spend money on railways rather thanroads
Nowadays, transportation is an essential issue and also a critical factor of development in a nation. Thus, some people think governments should improve the railway systems by using money on it rather than on road systems. while I agree with this point, however, I believe that road is equally important.
On the one hand, I agree that spending money to lay more railways is really important factors. trains are very good at handling the large quantities of similar items such as coal, oil, … it helps to transport bulk goods, or heavy stocks through long distances with lower cost and more safe than by road. For example, to transfer a hundred of car people need so many big trucks to carry all of them, but a train can accommodate all of these and even more, with only one person upfront can haul much more than a truck.
On the other hand, road systems are good for the movement in urban areas and easier to access over hilly areas, mountainous regions. also, it deliveries people and goods at door. For instance, in cities in Vietnam, there are so many small areas, long and deep alleys which only accessed by bike or other small vehicles. it is suitable for short distances within a city or an area to reach the destinations easier. In addition, the cost for laying roads are cheaper and faster than railways and generate more employments such as taxi drivers, shippers, …
In conclusion, to invest money to improve a transportation, governments need to prioritize on which one would be useful for their residents while railway and road systems are both important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78388278388 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57385898939 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7478441677 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154445104431 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618193289742 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109881305187 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107856923692 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699435358435 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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