The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Planning a holiday has been a difficult task among working people and students, especially when they are travelling in groups. However, it has been observed that there is more fun when we start a holiday trip without any pre-pan. In this essay, I will explain further that the going on holidays without any planning is completely full of excitement and joyeful, even it gives us more surprises.
Spending holidays with fellow students has always been full of excitement and happiness, especially when it is not scheduled. If we plan our leisure time then we know that we are going on holiday on a specific day, but if we decide it on the spot then it becomes more enjoyable and more excitement. College students, for instance, generally plan their holidays after scheduled examinations, but sometimes they finish their studies before end date which gives them immense pleasure.
It gives us more surprises to go on holiday without any prior planning, and it leads to happiness and more relaxation. If we are supposed to be there in office or in a official meeting but we see ourselves at a dream place or sight which we was not expected. Children of working people, for example, know that their parents are very busy in office and not getting off time, but when they take leaves and surprisingly go on holiday with their children then It give a great pleasure full of surprises.
To sum up, many of us go on holiday without any planning gives us amazing feeling full of excitement and joy, even it gives us many surprises without any prior plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...re supposed to be there in office or in a official meeting but we see ourselves a...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, know that their parents are very busy in office and not getting off time, but ...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
... on holiday with their children then It give a great pleasure full of surprises. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78066914498 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6027296388 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3984374682 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159628281648 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729047471327 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366673671817 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114230499797 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231336107643 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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