Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Although most of the countries facing specific challenges about the population, education, and in the environment as well, in the next coming ten years I expect them facing plenty of issues like increase in obesity percentage, and decrease in the educational level. This essay, we will discuss many ways to overcome these problems.
Firstly, as a major point to highlight is the obesity percentage. Which become very obvious all over the world. I believe that this detrimental issue related to a huge change in lifestyle. For example, everything you want to buy just by the application in your device it will come to you without bothering your self. Secondly, the rise in technology takes a lot of people's attention and their time, In other words, the concern about getting high marks not like before anymore.
In order to solve these two main problems, we need to work in the following aspects. Regarding the fleshiness, it can be solved by the family members using attractive ways and encourage them to work and give them some duties in their house. For example, cleaning own rooms, and arrange their place. Another way to control this problem is by the government role by advertisements and make some helpful and enjoyable courses and workshops. However, the educational level can become higher if the relatives did their best to encourage and support their sons and build their dreams as much as possible.
In conclusion, In the coming years, a lot of changes will happen. So we have to be clever and open-minded so we will be able to gain healthy humans and with high demand for learning stage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to highlight is the obesity percentage. Which become very obvious all over the world....
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...build their dreams as much as possible. In conclusion, In the coming years, a lo...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stage'
Suggestion: to stage
...umans and with high demand for learning stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91544117647 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65303400369 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.926633753 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235732016555 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587593673389 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568356604385 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132990495937 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787583651863 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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