The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities
What problem does this cause and what solution can you suggest?
There are more private vehicles on the road in major urban areas and, as a result, there is increased atmospheric pollution. In order to have a pollution-free atmosphere again, I would suggest a compulsory car-free days in the cities.
One obvious negative effect of having many cars on the road is air pollution. This is caused by the emission of carbon dioxide from numerous vehicles, and it has increased the greenhouse effect of the environment. According to the Ministry of Health in 2018, cars contribute about 67% to the environmental pollution. Not only is this pollution affecting the climate but it is also causing respiratory diseases to humans. So, although the people enjoy enormous benefit as they drive their private motor, these fuel-engined vehicles cause more harm as they pollute the atmosphere.
As a solution to this problem, can car-free days be effective ? Yes, I think so. By having no-car days, more people will be encouraged to use public transport. Evidently, the research conducted by the Environmental Sanitation Unit reported that, as the number of private vehicles on the road reduces, the emission rate also decreases. Therefore, If little carbon dioxide is emitted into the air, then the greenhouse gas tends to be removed.
In conclusion, more vehicles on the road threatens the purity of the environment which affects both human and climate. So, excessive car usage should be controlled by motivating the public to drive cars less and use mass transit more. The environment might become hazardous if this suggestion is unadopted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e number of private vehicles on the road reduces, the emission rate also decrease...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91366246824 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8315564928 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201436766748 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067590903533 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681387203226 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115553197649 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182367756713 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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