You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
• Say which edition and when did the article appear
• Explain why you lost contact with your friend
• Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to an article that was published about an environment conservation campaign and its champion mr. desilva last Friday in the seventh edition of your tabloid this month.
I would like to bring to your kind information that mr desilva, the man leading this campaign and many other highly ambitious conservation projects, has been a very close friend of mine whom I have known from my middle school days. we went to the same university but because of having different majors, getting together during our higher studies did not happen as frequently as before. since our graduation, we have been working in different fields and have not managed to see each other. we did exchange emails for a couple of years but subsequently seem to have lost contact gradually. I imagine he must be busy on his project undertakings.
I would like to request your help in getting us reconnected. we have always been on speaking terms, and are even now, but as so many years have elapsed since our last correspondence, it makes me feel the need to connect back in a way that can take him by surprise. I would be grateful if you could invite him to your office with some other reasons so that I could make a surprise visit and see him in person. I hope you will be like my idea or propose an alternative one.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
sanjay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... have known from my middle school days. we went to the same university but because...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...did not happen as frequently as before. since our graduation, we have been working in...
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Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...and have not managed to see each other. we did exchange emails for a couple of yea...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...st your help in getting us reconnected. we have always been on speaking terms, and...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... idea or propose an alternative one. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61673384203 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8403173672 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2307692308 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228133295819 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743453269038 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434577700275 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128080152153 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269677072756 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.