Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many modes to watch a movie. Some people prefer watching them on their gadgets at their own convenience whereas others believe that watching them in theatre is the best way to enjoy films. In my opinion, the latter mode does full justice to a film.
The supporters of viewing film in mobile or tabloids advocate that not only it is a cheaper way but also time-saving and convenient. The time to commute to and fro from theatre, the expensive movie ticket and extra munchies fare can be saved when seeing a film at home. Furthermore, many websites have a substantial collection of movies, both local and international, making it the mode of choice for the movie maniacs. In addition to this, sometimes owing to inevitable circumstances, an individual misses a film that is on theatres, and these means have easy accessibility to almost all the movies that had been off cinemas.
However, others, myself included, emphasize that movies should be watch in cinemas in order to be entertained by it to the fullest. Due to a radical transformation in the movie world, numerous movies that are made involve special effects such as 3-D or VFX, and to experience these effects to its maximum, one should see these films in theatres. For example, movies like Avataar, Avengers, and many more are visual treat and no phones or tablets can render the same experience. Therefore, I believe a traditional way of watching films can do full justice to it
To reiterate, although watching movies online is relatively easier and cheaper, I think it should be watched in the conventional way to enjoy it to the fullest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'watched'?
Suggestion: watched
...cluded, emphasize that movies should be watch in cinemas in order to be entertained b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, therefore, whereas, for example, i think, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8768115942 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79858412307 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9627981888 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.363636364 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169528991451 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063962144818 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393401149617 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933148422556 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397070228628 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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