Some people argue that the fittest, strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is as much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A few people believe that the success index is directly proportional to the level of physical fitness of a sportsperson or a team whereas others claim that the mental attitude is of equal importance. This essay will examine both the sides of argument and explain why I support the latter view.
Those who advocate that the success is synonymous to the physical strength say that the endurance threshold is increased with it. To enunciate, owing to the high level of fitness, a sportsman can fight the opponent till the very end which is a crucial factor in winning it. In addition, the physical power is a requisite in most of the popular games, namely hockey, cricket, tennis, javelin. Therefore, if an individual or a team is stronger than their counterpart, conspicuously the success is bound to follow.
Opponents, however, myself included, highlight that despite attributing majorly in deciding the success rate of a player and team, it is not the only factor. Determination, scheming ability and the enthusiasm equally influence the outcome of a sport. To illustrate, in spite of being an underdog team in the World Cup 1983, almost four decades after british rule, India won the final match against England because of the emotional factors involved in the game and the obssession to defeat England again. Hence, the passion and zeal contribute equally in gauging one's success in sports.
To reiterate, the ways to attain a successful sport's career is a contentious topic which has caused blatant polarization between people. Although the strength of an individual and a team play a vital role in determining the success of the same, in my opinion, the importance of mental fitness cannot be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in addition, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08833922261 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88311940094 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5698317097 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217007737958 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686812123009 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549509223161 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123891432617 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390029124061 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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