You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Albert.
I writing to request some time off from my job. Because I have been studying for a qualification and I need to complete it in order to submit it at the end of this month.
However, I am suggesting that in the next coming month I will take overtime hours to finish my remaining works. Furthermore, if I have any time off I will attend as much as possible. Also, my friend Johan is ready to be near my place if anyone asking for me he will assist him/her. Even that, you can call him anytime you want he is ready to cover my works.
I would be grateful if you could accept my order. In other words, the advantageous of this qualification will help me to be better in my job so I can even guide and promote my colleagues as well as benefiting the company by creating a good reputation.
Looking forward to your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Doaa Okaila.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Mr. Albert. I writing to request some time off from m...
^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Doaa Okaila.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41818181818 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66338641224 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0604593145 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232356212399 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871952299296 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631523011947 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127973541573 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742602707043 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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