People try new dangerous sports such as sky-diving or rock climbing. Should such sports be banned?
There is a controversial issue about prohibiting extreme sports. Some sportsmen state that society should not forbid this kind of activity, while some politicians claim that it should be under a ban. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea of freedom in sports.
Let us start with reasons why some sportsmen say that it should be free from any restrictions. The first reason is that people would engage in life-threatening sports anyway. Many people take such dangerous activities, because they both want to challenge themselves and feel a sense of adrenaline. Therefore, any limits are useless, since people would put their life at risk without notifying the public. Another motive is that any restriction in sports would be considered as an attempt to limit human rights. If society allows authorities to introduce a law banning risky sports, they can start prohibiting other aspects of life, so democratic nations should counteract any restrictions.
However, some politicians believe that such dangerous sports should be forbidden. They justify their point of view with the following arguments. Firstly, many people annually hurt themselves in risky sports. For example, many risk-takers break either legs or arms, when they try climb rocks. As a result, they often ruin their life, and it usually takes both a long time and huge finances to recover from injuries. Secondly, this kind of sports gives no guarantee that sportsmen would remain alive. Every year, thousands of people die, even if instructors teach them how to overcome dangerous stages, because clients are not protected from any unexpected situations.
In conclusion, even though some politicians argue that extreme sports should be prohibited, I think that people should have an opportunity to decide whether they want to take big risks for the above mentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73994931016 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4797122349 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251132024218 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790194115165 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837853932062 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1518024152 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466466430962 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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