Government is spending money on healthcare and education. Which sector do you think government should be spending in?
one of the most conspicuous trends today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the future of country depends on education. there is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
there are number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that government is spending money on education can not only contribute to people who are educated enough to know about healthy lifestyle are less likely to fail ill but also lead to a numerous others benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless, to say all these merits stand one is good stead, as far arguments their changes of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that its only likely to help are thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows, such a system, can they broaden the horizon, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication as a perseverance. Hence it is apparent why many are in favor of government is spading money on education.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of government is spending money on education are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03149606299 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91036233834 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5732759433 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141772552893 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530942057889 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705059314018 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936790663014 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502239432665 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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