More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating
Communicating with the help of technology has become more common among corporates and people for formal and casual interactions than direct communication. While this trend has many merits, such as sending rapid messages and effortless meetings, on the other hand, it has some drawbacks, namely depending too much on electronic machines and a decrease in social bonding.
Firstly, the advent of communication devices made a remarkable change in the ways of interacting with people. The main advantage of this development is we can speak with our desired contacts within minutes regardless of their physical location and the distance between us. This method enabled quick information sharing which resulted in fast decision making, and therefore many companies benefited from this and embraced the technology. Secondly, it dramatically reduces the traveling efforts and other difficulties. For example, ten years ago, if candidates wanted to attend an interview, they had to commute to the offices for face to face interviews. Nowadays, screening processes are occurring through Skype and other digital mediums.
However, we are taking the changes very seriously and overusing it. Since direct meetings reduced over the last few years among individuals, it created a void in human relations. Too much of distance communication has affected the social bonds and traditional way of cherishing love and friendship. In the business world, many fraudulent activities prone to happen due to the insecure way of digital meetings.
In conclusion, science and technology have brought many wonders to this world, one of them is communication via electronic inventions. Although we can obtain many excellent results utilizing this improvement in the digital messaging field, we have grave issues waiting for us if we do not regularize this medium.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52482269504 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98845085103 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7015010254 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152003727913 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046917220366 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603197139869 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883764708813 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356401623698 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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