the graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emission per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summaries the information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible.
The following line graph depicts that released carbon dioxide per person in metric tonnes in four countries United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 to 2007.
A first glance at graph reveals that emission of gas by United Kingdom and Sweden plunged while Italy and Portugal was an increased during 1967 and 2007.
Firstly, in 1967 discharge of carbon dioxide of United Kingdom was highest among other countries 11 metric tonnes, while of Portugal was ten times lesser than United kingdom.Meanwhile, the gas released by Italy and Sweden was 4 metric tonnes and 9 metric tons respectively.
And in following years till 2007 this emission gradually and slowly drop in United kingdom but was still higher than the apex of Italy and Portugal, about 7 metric tons. In Sweden carbon dioxide concentration in air soared in next ten years but in following decade substantially plummeted. However, its lowest points are equal to peak of Portugal approximately 4 metric tons. Although, in case of Italy and Portugal its rises but with comparison United Kingdom lower an average of 6 metric tons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...as ten times lesser than United kingdom.Meanwhile, the gas released by Italy and Sweden w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10497237569 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68238729711 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9354584338 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336233067182 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175307921104 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108247029407 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248942030925 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868109920583 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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