You received an email from your English friend, Susan. She asked you some information about one of your friends. Read part of her email below.
I’ve just got an email from your friend, Mai. She says she is going to do a course in London this Summer. She asks if she could stay with my family until she can find an apartment. Can you tell me a bit about her (things like her personality, hobbies and interests, and her current work or study if possible)? I want to see if she will fit in with my family.
Write an email to your friend. You do not need to include your name or addresses. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task Fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.
Dear Susan,
It’s great to receive your email. I’m sorry I couldn’t reply to you earlier because I’ve been really busy recently.
You asked me about Mai who is going to take a course in England this summer. I would say that she’s a helpful and humorous girl. You know, she’s always willing to help people around her. Besides, her sense of humor will make you laugh all days. Regarding Mai’s hobbies, she’s a big fan of playing tennis and cooking. This piece of information definitely excites you, right? Because as I know, you’re also keen on playing tennis. If you live with her, you two can experience relaxing moments together when playing tennis. About her cooking ability, I’m sure you will be highly impressed because this girl really has a God-given talent as a cook and her food will certainly make your mouth water. Is that great? If she moves to your house, you will have chance to enjoy delicious meals every day. In terms of her work, she’s now a chef at a French restaurant and she wants to study more about Western cuisine. That’s why she will take a cooking course this summer in London.
That’s some information I know about Mai and I think she will be an amazing friend for you. If you need any other information, just contact me. Have a nice day! Best regards,
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- You received an email from your English friend Susan She asked you some information about one of your friends Read part of her email below I ve just got an email from your friend Mai She says she is going to do a course in London this Summer She asks if s 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Susan, It's great to receive your email. I...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, really, regarding, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 5.60731707317 696% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83982683983 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53310015408 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658008658009 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9223565593 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1111111111 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415212734509 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132740373182 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822262159505 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257340158105 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622996446471 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.