More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Obesity issues are raising alarm in the health sector. Every day the extremely obese people are increasing. It is argued by some individuals that raising the cost of junk food can minimize this problem. Although the increasing price of such products can limit individuals from eating these products. I am of the opinion that awareness of exercise and workout is essential to cut the fattiness problems.
Routine exercise can reduce overweight issues to a large extent, therefore, encouraging people on physical workout is effecting way to minimize this issue. Daily workout or running in the morning hours helps the body in reducing accumulated fat and keeps individual healthier. For instance, in this competitive world, a computer engineer spends most of his day on a chair by solving computer problems to finish his project targets and have no time for a physical workout, therefore, making aware of the importance of these activities can minimize obesity issues.
However, the increasing market price of fatty foods can limit people to some extent from purchasing these products for consumption purpose. Inflation in fatty products will keep the poor individuals out of reach from these greasy items, therefore, overweight issues can be limited to rich people only. A survey from GST council has revealed that increasing tax on street foods in 2017 has decreased the overweight cases to 10 per cent only.
In conclusion, while increasing charges of junk foods may prevent the sale, I believe that the knowledge of daily work out is essential to get rid of from these fattiness issues. According to our current lifestyle, In future, obesity problems will increase if people are not motivated to do exercise regularly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23021582734 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73598928897 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8780599406 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199566821793 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760758409297 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576071179108 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129018250009 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318808021729 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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