More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Obesity issues are raising alarm in the health sector. Every day the extreme obese people are increasing. It is argued by some individuals that raising the cost of junk food can minimize this problem. Although increasing price of such products can limit individuals from eating these products. I am of the opinion that awareness on exercise and workout is essential to cut the fattiness problems.
Daily workout is an important tool in this sophisticated and modern life to overcome obesity issues. Technology has made over duties easy and less efforts from humans to do daily tasks. Various jobs are conducted with the aid of machines and computers, as a result, human physical strength is utilized too little extent only. For instance, jobs of computer engineers are mostly sitting jobs with only use of mind to solve problems and to do tasks. Hence zero muscle workout results into increase in adipose tissue in body. Therefore, morning walks or gym activities are vital for these individuals to have a good health and minimum obesity problems.
On the other hand, raising cost of fast food products can limit individuals from eating these products to some extent. Increase in the tax of fast food items impacts the sale of items. A survey from the GST council revealed that the increase from 5 per cent to 10 per cent tax has decreased the sale of fast food products up to 35 per cent. Hence, an increase in the prize of fattening foods may keep out of their hands, especially poor and middle-class individuals.
In conclusion, while increasing market-rate price of junk foods may prevent the sale, the knowledge of daily work out is essential to get rid of from these fattiness issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of junk food can minimize this problem. Although increasing price of such products can l...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...echnology has made over duties easy and less efforts from humans to do daily tasks. ...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...mind to solve problems and to do tasks. Hence zero muscle workout results into increa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93031358885 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.590502706 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.998161715 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144688765886 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466609933776 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372493221915 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854767380345 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247838202113 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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