Some people feel that entertainers( eg film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
For the past ten years, there has been significant amount of argument on the issue of how much professionals should be paid for the services they render. There has also been the talk that entertainers such as movie stars, pop artists and footballers are being overpaid.There are several reasons why I believe that this notion is false. Infact there are many other professionals that should be also well paid.
One of the main reasons why they should earn higher than other sectors is that they render professional services. This can be explained by the fact that their work involves a lot of skill, finesse and creativity than any other field. An example of this can be seen in the case of pop artists. They spend years and months writing and composing music as well as creating tunes that best fit. The movie star has to spend time in the theater just to have the right cast in which his mannerisms and emotions best convey the opinion in the script. Secondly, they are celebrities. As people have high expectations of celebrities and consider them more important than other members of the society, it is then not too much if their pay is high. To illustrate this, the public believe they should own the best cars and live in the most luxurious homes.
Entertainers are not the only ones who are entitled to good pay. There are other professionals like doctors, teachers and oil miners whose benefits should be enticing. This is is due to the fact that these people are exposed to a lot of hazard in the process of carrying out their jobs. An example is a doctor who is at risk of contacting infectious disease when exposed to sick patients or pricked by a needle during surgeries. Oil miners are exposed to adverse conditions of weather in the open sea while mining for oil.The implication is that their work involves much more sacrifice than the public could ever perceive.
In conclusion certain artists and skilled workers could never be said to be paid too much as their work involves much more professionalalism and hazard.In future I hope the government would invest more money into such sectors in order to address their challenges and better their welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7824933687 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58670606623 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0024338246 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.058823529 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208878690171 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062976313744 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529567390663 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126965138928 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047338429862 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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