Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Living abroad is something very common for a sort of reasons. Sometimes it could be an option, but sometimes it is not, unfortunately. In the second case, the explanation to a decision like that could be from a civil war to reasons such as economical crisis, for example. While some people belive that living in another country where the language is not their native language could be a problem, I tend to think it is an opportunity. This is why I disagree with this opinion. The purpose of this essay is discuss the positive aspects to have this experience as an immigrant or even as a refugee.
On the one hand, it is considered by many that living overseas can be a cause of many social and practical problems, mainly because of the language gap. For instance, a Brazilian, who speaks Portuguese, could have diffent kinds of problems living in the UK, where English is the local language. These difficult situations can be worst if the difference between the native language and the local language is also related to the alphabet. To illustrate, it is possible to mention a Japanese speaker or even a Russian speaker who have to live in Brazil, for example.
On the other hand, others support the opinion that despite of the possible problems, living overseas can be a chance to have a better life. And, as mentioned before, for some individuals living in another country it is the only possibility and not exactly an option. Two solutions to reduce this issue are some resources as translators and the foreigner community in the new country, which are extremely supportive in a first moment. Moreover, in long term it is totally possible to learn the local language, reducing all the problems related to the communication.
With the above in mind, it is also necessary to consider that immigration is not new for the humanity and it is part of our language and culture in general. In conclusion, I think living abroad is more an opportunity than a problem, mainly because it is possible to manage the problems and improve the language with the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... be from a civil war to reasons such as economical crisis, for example. While some people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in general, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77871148459 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7571165476 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4798210488 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227610456649 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739240850934 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057754882676 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134241574686 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470846659838 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.