The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The two diagrams illustrate the number of coffee and bananas’ sales, with Fairtrade-labelled, between 1999 and 2004 over uk, switzerland, denmark, belgium and sweden.
Overall, the sales were usually increased, except bananas in sweden and denmark. likewise, it is clear that bananas’ sales in switzerland became the largest trade.
As for the sales of coffee, switzerland earned 3 millions of euros, which was the largest trade, rose to 6 millions of euros in 2004. uk got a steadily rise from 1.5 to 20 millions of euros after 5 years, denmark gained 1.8 millions of euros in 1999 and up to 2 millions of euros slightly in 2004. The profits in belgium sweden were the lowest, just took from 1 and 0.8 millions of euros at the beginning, to 1.7 and 1 million of euros at the end.
In bananas’ sales, switzerland was the leader from 15 to 47 millions of euros obviously, while uk also raised consistently by 4.5 millions of euros at 1 million. likewise, belgium recorded an increase over the period, started at 0.6 million and ended at 4 million significantly. However, the incomes between sweden and denmark were also declined, from 1.8 and 2 millions of euros, separately, dropped to 1 and 0.9 millions of euros gradually.
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
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Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
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Suggestion: 2 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '9 million'.
Suggestion: 9 million
...f euros, separately, dropped to 1 and 0.9 millions of euros gradually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00355420602 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8231324631 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902567144773 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558824094909 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546377886755 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899803613022 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623708308396 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.