Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families
*To what extent do you agree or disagree*?
There is currently a contentious argument over whether prompt pace and worry of present day lifestyle is having a negative impact on families. I totally agree with this opinion because there been an increase in use of information and communication technology and great challenges pose by this present day lifestyle.
The main reason why I believe prompt pace and worry of present day lifestyle is having a negative impact on families is because the use of information and communication technology has been on increase these days and this has made families less intractive in their various home, having less or no time to discuss matters affecting family or create time for family picknic. For instance, an husband who came back from work will busy his phone or laptop in his room chatting with friends, responding to different e-mails, commenting on various post on twitter, Facebook and Instagram, whereas, this has not be the trend in the last decade where family use best of thier time to intract and discuss positive ways to improve their family. This present day lifestyle has impacted negatively on famolies.
Another reason why I support this notion that prompt pace and worry of present day lifestyle is having a negative impact on families due to the fact that there are vsriuos challenge in present days. You will see some one who is multiple job in order to increase his income to meet family needs therefore, having little time to rest, such person can become emotional imbalance because of stress he/she has undergo at various working place before coming home, little thing at home he/she will become irritable and violence can result. In addition, the workload at work can make someone to be depress, if workload is too much to bear. So also air pollution from the cities is another source of distress in the present days.
In conclusion, I completely agree that prompt pace and worry of present days lifestyle have impacted negatively on families because level at which people adhere to their phone and laptop are on increase and day-to-day chanlleges has been causing family discord.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99145299145 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55579851917 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501424501425 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.301223928 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.2 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165962176778 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697992143879 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576450440312 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115085411282 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027881159377 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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