Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In recent years, many people claim that zoos are treating captive animals with cruelty while others oppose this view. I believe that zoos are useful to protect wildlife habitats for various reasons.
On the one hand, wild animals are being kept in cages and they must live under artificial environment while they are supposed to live freely. Over time, these animals will rely on the human for food, lose their natural characteristics such as hunting and unable to assimilate into wildlife habitats. Additionally, zoo owners are believed to be unethical as they use animals for entertainment and gain tremendous profits from visitors. Due to these reasons, many people believe that zoos should be closed down to avoid animal exploitation.
On the other hand, zoos have many contributions to protect wildlife creatures. In many places, wildlife parks are providing temporary shelter to protect endangered animals from illegal hunting. Moreover, zoos allow scientists to study animals and their behaviour. As a result of this, the human could understand and research effective ways to preserve rare animals. Another argument is that zoological gardens are educational, interesting and fun for children. Many parents and their kids could find a friendly and exciting place to learn more about animals. This could raise the awareness of many people about protecting wild animals. Last but not least, profits which are gained from zoo visitors could be used to improve the living conditions of temporary captive animals.
In conclusion, there are different arguments about zoos and the way they are treating animals. However, in my opinion, zoos are protecting wild animals in many effective ways and therefore, zoos should not be ceased to exist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36231884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65970657544 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.66977795 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293934597564 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106807525129 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868127139993 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202949005207 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452168602975 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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