it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviors to children?
There is no doubt that some people such supposes and school supervisors believe in taking several directions in raising and teaching kids how to detecting what is correct and what is incorrect. However, punishment is the first choice for both parties, sometimes punishment takes physical direction, other times takes different aspects. Therefor in this essay I will discuss both sides of the two aspects, supporting my view with example, and will offer which side I tend to agree with.
Firstly, a huge percentage of parents or teachers tend to face their kids or students wrong actions with physical punishment, which can take several shapes, such like beating kids with bare hands or using some sort of sticks or belts. It is not accepted in all ways to do any physical harms to kids or children as those behaves affect them in many ways, if the body injuries can be treated, the psychological injury will never, also, these kind of actions can damage their self-confidence, such as, shouting out in kids faces or beating them while crossing streets, I think they will never have the courage again in near future to cross the street by their own.
In contrast, other people takes the direction of good treatment with guidance, they give their kids with guidance while in proper way, they let them experience and discover while putting an eye and supervising their activities and to interfere once the kids are in danger. Giving an example, in schools or homes, a repeated awareness on dealing with electricity should be cleared to kids, in return when young children put their focus on repeated instruction on such danger, the result will be a good awareness and a wisdom dealing with any electricity outputs or plugs.
In conclusion, we can figure that, a lot of kids are psychological damages, that is because of previous exposure of physical punishment. However, others grow with good sense of self-confident and impressive skills of decision-making. Finally, I completely agree with giving children their space while supervising their activity to build a good person to the society and their self.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... psychological injury will never, also, these kind of actions can damage their self-confid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04285714286 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72396619596 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.7886596593 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.5 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110596292915 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458255901061 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258659470567 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689274555118 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240737368488 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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