Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and vie your own opinion.
There is no doubt that, nowadays, a not quite percentage of people tend to live along with their financial or carriers problems without working having developed circumstance. In this essay I will discuss both point of views and will give why I agree going with career and financial developments and improvements.
Because of economic situation in many countries, also a wide base of people has no personal responsibilities or supposes or it is hard to start a family, such as a 5 years experienced faculty graduate who is not married, a such person has no vision except their monthly income which covers their needs for going out or buying new clothes. In contrast, if thinking about the future will find a need of doing a further studies or getting some courses to improve their career or to get their value in market to escalate, resulting, a higher salary scale and job position.
Although, it is very important to mention that a lot of employees are working in environments or some sort of careers that they don’t feel satisfied with, though, they lake of confidence to make a career shift, which can result a fruitful growth of career life and a prosper in financial situation. Mentioning an example of a recently graduated mechanical engineer who started his practical life with working for factories services such as production lines or machine maintenance, after few months he discovered that this is not the life or future he wants to have. He took the decision of moving his career to construction industry, today this guy owns his own engineering consulting firm which is responsible of several mega projects in MENA region.
In conclusion, each one needs to have a vision to their future, and a welling to pursue their mission to reach the place they’ve always dreamed to be, though, sometimes it is vital to move forward with a totally new experience and take the risk. Finally, I am totally agreeing with the argue of improving and developing our own skills to conquer our dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91202346041 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82340582827 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609970674487 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4937621383 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.111111111 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8888888889 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109279159609 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445412262214 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236678086848 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610153397 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162063392054 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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