Birth rate
The line graph presents the numbers of baby that born in China and the USA since 1920 until 2000.
During the period, there were a decreasing trend of birth rate on both countries.
In the staring period and end of the period, there are more children born in USA than China. However,
there were a fluctuated trend during 1935 till 1955 for those countries. Even tough China has less baby
born on 1920, it has a higher births rate than USA in 1935 for 15%. Then decline significantly to 5% in
1940. After having a steady number until 1945, the percentage of baby born in China reach it top to 20%
in 1950.
On other hand, the number of baby born in USA fall to it deepest number for less than 5% in 1945 and
increase dramatically to 15% in the next 5 years. Since 1950, in USA and China there were a declining
trend of baby born. At the end of the period, both countries had birth rates less than 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'tops'?
Suggestion: tops
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the deepest'.
Suggestion: it the deepest
... the number of baby born in USA fall to it deepest number for less than 5% in 1945 and in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32558139535 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13444161202 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9710956396 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177228288982 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942279415406 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145242320908 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102748924516 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146607143741 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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