In many countries, a relatively new phenomenon of “ graying society”, which means the proportion of old people is ever-increasing, comes into being. This phenomenon has enjoyed increasing popularity, with both positive and negative outcomes. Form my perspective, this issue contributes to loads of bad effects.
The increasing number of elders tends to have a unfavorable influence on families. The key reason may root in the fact that the majority of seniors ma be physically fragile and vulnerable to various diseases, such as heart attacks and diabetics. As a result, much money has to be dedicated to curing their diseases and maintaining their health. One of the surveys conducted b a group in china found that the annual expenditure on fighting against diseases of the elder family members almost accounted for 40% of the total family income. There will be a considerable financial burden on their offspring, which arouses much pressure under the roof.
As well as the detrimental effects on families, the smaller entity of the community, the whole society will also be affected undesirably. The hunger proportion of the aging population means the shrinking number of work force. The gross domestic production will suffer a decline, which inevitably results in the recession in the economic field. In the long run, other social aspects are also doomed to degenerate. Moreover, government has to provide excessive pension and other welfare for the retired. For this reason, the administration must encounter overwhelmingly strong burden, thus unable to make sufficient investment in other social projects.
As analyzed above, population aging ma bring about many unfavorable results. It is urgent for us to think about the ways to reverse this unhappy social trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...creasing number of elders tends to have a unfavorable influence on families. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99863063986 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7268209215 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177254234036 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443731503049 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583778464889 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105309752472 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917617452338 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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