The charts below show the primary purposes for British people leaving their country in 1999 and the amount of those people who left the country for less than a week.
The bar graphs compare the two main reasons why British people went abroad in 1999 and the number of those who came back within a week.
Overall, as the age rises the more British leave the country for work/study, while the opposite trend could be seen for those leaving for holiday. It is also noticeable that the highest percentage of people returning within a week belongs to the age category of below 20, whereas the age group of 25-30 comprised the lowest figure.
Leaving the country for holiday was the most common reason for those under 20 at 80%, while this age comprised the least number for work/study at 10%. The proportion of those who went abroad for a holiday in the age category of 25-30 was nearly 3 times higher than those who left for work/study at just over a fifth. Above 40 had the highest figure of people going abroad for work/study at 70% but it also comprised the smallest number for British who left for a holiday at 30%.
Returning within a week was commonly observed for those under 20 at approximately 65% but the 25-30-year-old group had the least number of cases at 35 %. The figures for 20-25, 35-40 and above 40 were about a half, nearly 40% and just over 40% respectively.
- The graph below shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia. 73
- Some people believe that the government should make university education free for all Others disagree and say that students should pay for their own education 78
- Life is better when technology was simpler.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- The chart below shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...0 and above 40 were about a half, nearly 40% and just over 40% respectively.
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Suggestion:
... above 40 were about a half, nearly 40% and just over 40% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60368663594 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39680106226 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502304147465 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 21.7280780328 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.875 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326236667395 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162862445888 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786060904565 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205162017192 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838076909864 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.