The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not home to care for their children.
Some individuals share the belief that in order to solve the booming number of youth offenders, the women should stay at home, spend enormous time in taking care of children. Doing so, they would lessen the social issue in which young people are engaged.
Furthermore, some people still believe in the common expression "Mother knows best" Because, of the strong bond during gestation, mother's intuition is good for children even without knowing the persona of the child. In addition, some say that values begin at home, women should set a good example all the time; like helping the chi...
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.398 4.7
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