A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for where you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Ram,
Thank you so much for helping me in this matter. It will ease my tension towards my house and dog during my holidays. Please contact me in case of anything you want during this period on my mobile phone, if it is not reachable, try to connect on my wife mobile number, its +917676954426.
I want you to follow some rules during this period for my dog, as he needs meat every day in the morning, please bring it fresh from the Gupta mart in opposite lane in morning time around 10 a.m. Secondly, take him to park in the evening time at 5:30 p.m. in society park. Don’t forget to tie him during other times with the back door. More importantly, some neighbors had made a compliant to society of his barking last week, please take care of him in that, I don’t want that issue again.
Regarding other things in house. Remember to close all the doors whenever you leave and switch on the safety alarm when you are away from house and during night time to stay safe from burglars. I have booked technician to repair the Air conditioner on coming Sunday, please follow that and lastly, municipality people may also come to check drainage system during this weekend.
I hope you will have a great time at my house and thank you once again.
With regards,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ram, Thank you so much for helping me in this...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... thank you once again. With regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e again. With regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, may, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55128205128 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26255718668 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623931623932 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8787257314 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942478851882 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395195469221 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330156623913 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671334995035 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190527930275 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.