Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that the issue of gender equality has been debated for a long period. Some people opine females can shoulder the same responsibility for national police departments or army, despite some question for the qualification of females in those positions. Personally, I advocate for equality between females and males because so-called drawbacks can be eradicated theoretically.
On the one hand, some people believe compared with men, women are not capable of those occupations in police or military divisions for physical and mental reasons. Initially, it is physical structure and corresponding insufficiency in athletic ability that lead to this discrimination against females. Males athletes, for example, normally outperform females in Olympic sports like track and field and better world records can be seen in men rather than women. In addition, someone argues that females are more emotional and less rational than their counterparts in emergency situations, which are considerably frequent for those positions. Consequently, sly criminals may take advantage of it by using hostages as a distraction.
On the other hand, others insist that both genders should have the same right to participate in those departments. First, major problems such as insufficient physical strength can be readily addressed with the assistance of high-technology equipment. Artificial exoskeletons, for example, are a new kind of auxiliary facility, which can reinforce the power of the legs and arms of their subjects, erasing the apparent distinction between females and males. Second, compared with physical strength, women normally perform better in other alternative determinants required for those positions. being cautious, for instance, is a pivotal virtue, and according to psychology research, women tend to behave better in this filed.
In conclusion, I share the same view with those advocates of the same importance of women in participation in police or military force because the introduction of advanced technology and some other virtue of women can easily justify those drawbacks in physical and mental aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64285714286 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11633544767 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7319836698 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.769230769 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215463063964 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739640461453 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607932446359 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140531513967 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197142763968 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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