The space travel is fantastic these days and people are very fascinated towards it but there are many environmental problems in our planet that need to be resolved first. What is your opinion? Should money be spent on space travel or on environmental issues?
Nowadays, there is ongoing debate for importance between space travel and environmental problems, which attracted plethora of controversies and drawn the attention from the public. it can be agree that both have their own advantages and values, and should be manage with proper planning. this essay will discuss both sides and thus lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why space travel is an eye catcher these days, and many companies are working to design technologies to space as well as trying to make it affordable for people. As per recent study conducted by TIO newspaper resulted, 15 companies around the world in space tourism and working on technologies to make it safer with reducing price. Therefore, space travel will be affordable in future for public with minimum prices and it will attract most people around the world.
On the other hand, some people hold view point for environment prospective and believe that countries should invest to save environment instead wasting money on luxury research programs. To consider this fact, it can be agreed that save nature is also require and government should plan and policies to maintain environment. Hence, environment have adverse effect from CO2 and green house gases, which will be more produce from space travel programs.
Agglomerating above all points, it can be concluded that, both aspect is require and government and authorities should monitor their pros and cons, and draft some policies to invest money in both areas which can save environment as well as support space travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2421875 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6163828054 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3341991269 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.2 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257843590669 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100648242885 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488395319787 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155013176941 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174593757414 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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