study abroad
Nowadays, student tend to go abroad to study instead of doing a degree of university in their own country. Essay will discuss about the benefits and drawbacks relevant these development.
There are clear several benefits of study in oversea. Firstly, people learning in foreign countries who can approach to modern education systems, which they can be trained by real equipments such as computers, analyzers, and other related instruments. As a result, these students can be received a great deal of skills to using and operating new machines. Secondly, oversea students who can fluent foreign language. For instance, they have to go to the shop to buy necessary things, they can speak English and deal with shop assistant, which help them listen native language. Therefore, they will be learned both foreign language and deal skills everyday. beside that, students going abroad who can approach to new cultures such as fashion, conventional cuisine in this country where you have learning. For example, living in Japan they have more opportunities to enjoin famous foods and wear Kimono.
On the other hands, there are myriad drawbacks when students go to the foreign countries to do university degree. They leave their family far a way to arrive new life so they must to take care themself at all. And abroad students have to face differential culture problems which they can not adapt right way such as cuisine, weather and language, it make these students are slow understand knowledges.
In conclusion, recently student have more chance to study in other countries than the student in the past, but they have to face some drawback issues beside various benefits from doing a university degree.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...out the benefits and drawbacks relevant these development. There are clear several benefits of ...
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Line 3, column 647, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d both foreign language and deal skills everyday. beside that, students going abroad who...
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Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
...eign language and deal skills everyday. beside that, students going abroad who can app...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ly far a way to arrive new life so they must to take care themself at all. And abroad s...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ch as cuisine, weather and language, it make these students are slow understand know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15523465704 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60090703063 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0274808404 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125656796771 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527580859438 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864832740125 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103666201159 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675357335791 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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