Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of the time, human being have always strived to improve their living standards and brings more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, human tried to find something for communication better way.
In 21 century with the internet, communication has entered a new phase. Nowadays people have at least one cell phone in their bag or pocket. Until the day, they spend more than 6 or 7 hours on social media and other important applications.
internet is an inseparable part of today life. my opinion as a 23 years old student, I believe the government should spend more time and attention to improving the internet lines. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding reasons.
First and foremost reason that I would like to bring here is that as a student all of my projects and communications and studies depends on the internet. I need the internet to stay in touch with professors I can’t see personally. Generally, I believe the internet is one of the most important things in our lives. And poor connection or small internet lines are the problems that disturb our living standard. As a personal experience 2 weeks ago I was talking to one of my favorite professor at one of the best France universities on Skype, because of my poor connection, we lose contact repeatedly. that was my worse nightmare.
so I believe the government should improve the internet because of international communications and opportunities.
The second reason we can point out is that the internet can be so fun and entertaining as well. new applications that can entertain everyone for hours. In this time of history that every men and women are busy and people don’t have so much time for resting and doing old hobbies (like a picnic, fishing ), it’s a very good way. And also is very good for aged people, those who have a lot of time and don’t have anything special to do. For instance, my grandmother was board during the day, but after I instated Instagram for her, she was very excited and thankful that she can spend most of time in that. The government should improve the internet access because for some people like my grandmother that know nothing about the internet it is necessary that the internet access stay without problem or losing connection.
To wrap it up, in our modern life the internet play a prominent role in all filed. Honestly, fortunately or unfortunately our life depends on it. so I believe is like torture if we don’t have good access. everyone uses the internet as they need or want. The internet is an infinite source of information. we have to use it in the best way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, if, second, so, well, at least, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88402625821 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84592225284 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507658643326 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8001217488 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9259259259 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201697636651 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550798236002 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473822540151 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956884364485 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385806495081 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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