Claim: Though often considered an objective pursuit, learning about the historical past requires creativity.
Reason: Because we can never know the past directly, we must reconstruct it by imaginatively interpreting historical accounts, documents, and artifacts.
As one of the parts of liberal arts, history is standing for the most critical position because of its importance, logic, and reflection to human society. While with the fast-developing world provide technology support and creativity ideas, tracing back to history has faced many challenges. Even though to pursue being objective, it is hard when to stay it interpreting the past. However, the difficulty does not mean impossible; the accuracy of the history study is also different from the special periods.
Creativity in history study is essential, but keeping objective also is significant. Creativity requires for all kinds of knowledge-producing activity, from inventing a small fan to establishing an abstract perplex theory. Since interpreting historical activities, events, and art needs imagination, and it is difficult for people to pursue being utterly impartial while studying history. Nonetheless, object still vital because it prevents using evidence to express a personal opinion or spread it as rumors. In addition, granting we cannot know the past directly, we still should not rely on creativity to explain history wildly as a painter or a musician. Also, creativity in history is not confined to the imagination; it also includes writing skills, critical thinking, and logic to challenge the previous dubious explanation.
While studying and doing research related to history have highly cost on time and energy, those documents require methodology creativity too. Studying history about 1 million years ago is very different from studying 100 million years ago one. If interpreting history count on creative writing solely, the past will lose its value because of the lack of credulity. In fact, in the history field, the method that finding and searching on documents are more critical than reading and writing it. Sometimes, only cooperation between different science field can make a breakthrough such as joint with geology, archeology, sociology, and chemistry.
Last but not least, history is updating with new findings. People change their perspectives to look at history when new evidence comes out. Nonetheless, artifacts, historical documents are needed in the history field; creativity is essential but not the only essence when considering its necessary in the academic area. It based on the imagination to connect the evidence, to find the new view, and to prove the conclusion, not because in interpretation.
Therefore, it is a popular idea that historians’ work is sitting on the table to explain the documents, long lists of accounts, and artifacts by using imagination. However, it is a misunderstanding. In the history field, being objective while using imagination is essential and the way to apply creativity never confined to reconstruct old stories. The creativity is for finding the truth before it lost in the unknown world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...it prevents using evidence to express a personal opinion or spread it as rumors. In addition, gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49775784753 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11863419875 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551569506726 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6201289482 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.608695652 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3913043478 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149984818701 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403669915383 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464589728778 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802140887673 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335581229866 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.