people should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
In this day and age, terms such as transnational travel or working overseas have been trivialized due to the increasingly interconnected world. However, this also raises a question that whether newcomers should adapt to the changes if they reside in a new environment. Personally, I agree with this view for certain reasons.
Traditions and customs are held valuable by a nation’s people as they are the very foundation of their ethnicity and give them a sense of national identity. Therefore, people, no matter in which circumstances, will try to reserve and promulgate these intangible values. For this reason, newcomers who can pay respect and adopt the way of life of their current country of residence would gain acknowledgement from its locals.
As globalization has given rise to multinational corporations, it is common to see workplaces with mixed national backgrounds. With this in mind, job hunters who plan their career goals which take a global dimension should equip themselves with the knowledge of the differences among cultures. This preparation can be a pivotal survival tool if they decide to try their career’s luck in another nation. For example, a foreign job applicant can gain an advantage edge if he demonstrates his thorough understanding of his host country’s background to the employers. However, adaptation is not a mere light switch, which can be turned on and off in seconds, so that it’s an uphill struggle for unadaptable people to adjust their habits accordingly to fit in during their expatriation
But, being unable to change doesn’t mean anyone can repel local communities. Instead, every worldwide traveller should look into the taboos in different places that definitely prompt local hostility. For example, although beef is considered to be one the most appetizing of all meat, ordering beefsteak at any restaurants in India causes outrage due to the fact that cows in this religiously intensive land are revered as if they were gods.
In conclusion, it is true that expatriates should be aware of acceptable behaviours and rules in the host country if they don’t want to face alienation.
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree and disagree? 89
- Every one should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions? 89
- International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 11
- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29941860465 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15810480296 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6832041483 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.214285714 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698156723863 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250811746435 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335461125546 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0399587204168 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195515764151 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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