Every one should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a tendency in Europe and also on the world that people start shifting into vegetarian diet. First of all, people think that vegetarian diet can help them to attain better health's state and they want to protest about the lack of animal well-fare in farms. But I believe that a good diet is a diet which is balanced among groups of ingredients.
Vegetarian diet can bring you a lot of benefits. Because of low fat and cholesterol intake, vegetarians are not likely to meet some health problems like cadiovascular diseases. Secondly, vegetables and fruits contain tons of vitamins and good fibre which will promote people's digestive tract and health also. High water concentration in vegetables and fruits can help people's organs work smoother and help you to fight back the aging process. Thirdly, Animal intensive farming system dispose to the environment a big portion of waste everyday and intensive farm is good place for the development of new diseases, this bioharzard is also exaggerated by the imprudent use of antibiotics in treating animals. Contrary to animal farms, growing plants is a good way to coop with weather change, growing some special food plant can help to reform the fertility of soil and retain soil from the erosion process.
But vegetarian diet is not always an elixir for human. Some essential amino acids and vitamins doesnt exist in vegetarians diet, so vegetarians will definitely suffer from the lack of some nutrients, and they have to overcome this by taking supplement pills or functional foods. And when it comes to some activities which require greater strength and amount of energy, vegetarians will find it hard to keep up with people who have normal diet. In some rural area where food resources are limited, becoming a vegetarian is not a wise choice, because rural areas's people dont have a wide range of choices like those who live in the city, they have to eat whatever the nature or the market offer to them. And to retain most of nutrients in vegetarians food, cooking style play a significant role, it is advisable for vegetarian ingredients to be eaten raw, steamed or stir-fried rather than deep boiled or deep fried like the way European people always treat their food.
In conclusion, there are benefits and disadvantages of becoming a vegetarian. But when choosing a suitable diet, people should always look for advices from doctor and other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...mote peoples digestive tract and health also. High water concentration in vegetables...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... the environment a big portion of waste everyday and intensive farm is good place for th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...Some essential amino acids and vitamins doesnt exist in vegetarians diet, so vegetaria...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ise choice, because rural areass people dont have a wide range of choices like those...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the nutrients') or simply say ''most nutrients''.
Suggestion: most of the nutrients; most nutrients
...the market offer to them. And to retain most of nutrients in vegetarians food, cooking style play...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9702970297 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63224390394 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566831683168 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7485644731 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183418892637 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700986368014 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471719060964 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116875455647 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412122686683 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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