You are in hospital as a result of a recent accident. Your co-workers have visited you several
times and have given you cards and flowers.
Write to your workmates. In your letter
• Tell them about your current condition
• Thank them for their thoughts and support
Dear colleagues,
I hope this finds you well. since, I had an acute accident last week and I had to spend a week at the hospital which was so boring and disappointed I really thank from all of you for bringing me those flowers and cards Also visiting me several times. Your concern and care mean a lot to me. since the doctors did many tests on me, They says I can probably go home in a few days’ time. To tell you the truth I’d check out today if I could, I’m not able to endure this atmosphere, with this bruised face and broken ankle.I prefer to lay in my bed and watch TV.
Furthermore, Actually, you’re quite aware, how much I complain about my job which was always put me in pressure , Honestly I realize how much I miss my job and really like those days come back again. Anyway, I hope you are all well. I hope to see you as soon as my injured leg improves. thanks you again.
Regards,
Chi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...agues, I hope this finds you well. since, I had an acute accident last week and ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
... the doctors did many tests on me, They says I can probably go home in a few days&ap...
^^^^
Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...with this bruised face and broken ankle.I prefer to lay in my bed and watch TV. ...
^
Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... job which was always put me in pressure , Honestly I realize how much I miss my j...
^^
Line 9, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...you as soon as my injured leg improves. thanks you again. Regards, Chi.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, furthermore, honestly, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34040567182 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697142857143 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5757794606 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109722293244 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529668791885 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342654782597 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886615881569 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100206275594 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.