The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and
1980.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given bar chart gives information about the numbers for imprisonment in five nations from 1930 to 1980.
Overall, it can be seen that in 1930, Canada had highest number of prisoners, which replaced by the United States in 1980. However, Great Britain had least figures of imprisonment throughout the 50 years.
Categorically speaking, in 1930 and 1940, the Great Britain had almost 29,000 prisoners. However, there were 120,000 prisoners in Canada. Newzeland and the United States shared same figures, which was 100,000 and the imprisonment numbers in Australia were around 60,000, in 1930. In 1940, the United States had nearly 130,000 prisoners, which declined by 20,000 in 1950. Moreover, the trend was similar in the year 1960 as it was in 1940. The figures for imprisonment in the Great Britain, Australia and Newzeland were 80,000 in 1970. Nevertheless, around 50,000 imprisonments in Australia and the United States accounted for 140,000 in the year 1980.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d by the United States in 1980. However, Great Britain had least figures of impri...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
...States in 1980. However, Great Britain had least figures of imprisonment throughout the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74166981635 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8116252878 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123069590698 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605674212844 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631738952942 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113638873372 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611843141099 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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