do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Today, there are many a job titles such as a doctor, a teacher, a police, a pilot, etc in the world. All of these jobs have their own risks and advantages. And, Some of them need working quickly but in some others people should work carefully. I think that depend's on which the title people have, wherever, whatever or however they work.
First of all, in companies and factories bosses always would like to have a good job and productive employees. And, they would hire the best workers for their projects which produce their products. Because, employees performances more important than other people who work with in these environments. Almost all of these employers provide their members various options including some social activities and playing games for improving their members' efforts.
Also, in some jobs there would be several the risk factors which affect their operations and surgeries. For example, in surgeries doctors operate their patients who have some diseases and an ill problems. And, these problems sometimes could be more problematic than the other. So, these doctors should concentrate their jobs highly and slowly, if not there would be an injury, would be the death either.
In addition, in education there would so many lessons such as a science, a math, a biology, a sociology, etc. Although, all these classes have their own teaching processes which tought by a teacher, some parts of them need the slow process because some lessons are difficult than easy ones. In these lectures, teacher should explain their lessons clearly and exactly.
Furthermore, some titles such like racing have their competitors who drive a car, and in the air there would so many planes which leaded by a pilot. All of these jobs have more risk but they need more risk which taken by their owners. Even though all these competitors a bold the only one of them reach the target. So, for gaining the competition they should get the risk.
In conclusion, taking accounts of all above reasons and examples, workers and leaders sometimes take risks but the other should be careful. I think neither working quickly nor working slowly is the best, that depend's on which titles people have.
- Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 73
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? 76
- Some people think that the use of mobile phones should be banned in public places such as in libraries, shops and on public transport. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 70
- A new acquaintance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? 60
- Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'would' and 'like'.
Suggestion: would always like
... all, in companies and factories bosses always would like to have a good job and productive emplo...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... projects which produce their products. Because, employees performances more important ...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...ients who have some diseases and an ill problems. And, these problems sometimes could be...
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Line 17, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... more risk which taken by their owners. Even though all these competitors a bold the only o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03542234332 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4193883829 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517711171662 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1745870106 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4761904762 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100788542358 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404042109321 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511331113272 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688984381277 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466453216674 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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