Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern world, efficiency is important and workers should notice that wasting valuable time and money of the company isn't correct. In my opinion, everyone should try to do their job faster, although it means they can make more mistakes. I will explain why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, time is a valuable asset that should be appreciated. Usually, when big companies are working on group projects, they are obligated to meet a deadline. Therefore, every employee should work quickly to meet that deadline. My personal experience is an indication of this. While I was working on my Master’s thesis, I was accompanied by another student to develop a code for the simulation of some big data. We had limited time to come up with an acceptable result which forced us to work notably faster. Consequently, there were some flaws in our work that needed some more time to review but we managed to come up with an answer that was satisfactory.
Furthermore, rushing to finish your task can give you the opportunity to make more money. If you could finish the given task to you faster you would stand more chance to land another job that has better pay. For instance, two years ago I was working on two different projects in which one of them was slightly more complicated but had a better bonus. I tried to first work on the easier project in order to put my focus on the next one which needed more dedication. There might have been some mistakes in the first project but the end result wasn't horrible and when I managed to finish it, hereby I had enough time to work on my other project which had a greater expense and was more complicated.
In conclusion, although employees wouldn't produce flawless results while working faster, they could manage to find more chances to make money and finish the task in a reasonable time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67073170732 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53965427626 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2761750256 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222893425145 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747096645027 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319920587253 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133339672909 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103624460228 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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