In many countries school have severs problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Numerous studies have consistently found in several countries that schools are facing serious problem of student’s behavior that actually demonstrate the lackness of the society as well parent's nourishment. I, however, believe that there would be number of possible outcomes to reduce behavioral issues among the students.
Survey depicts that rising difficulty of students behavior has become more crucial various countries while in some countries people have got rid out of this problem by implementing different precautions. Whereas, many pedagogical experts believes that currently parents are less anxious about children's daily activities owing to busy life schedule. Along with this, fully excess of internet and getting involved every time with different gadgets is also a main cause of student's rude behavior that eventually keep the children far from physical activities. Furthermore, it has seen that in third world countries teachers are not enough educated to guide students appropriately.
n order to counter such problems government need to provide education and trainings in school pertaining to behavior issues, as well as, form the criteria of teachers evaluation system that eventually will be worthwhile for future generation as well. More to add, one of the foremost requirement by government is to be make those parents educated who are not enough capable to guide their children mannerly.
To sum up, I would like to conclude by saying that in order to reduce the behavioral problem in schools government should form the criteria of spreading awareness system across the country wherein parents and students both can learn easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, so, third, well, whereas, while, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59842519685 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82664279311 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5404960579 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233462757004 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894156002702 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634991174748 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135748289956 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057792315738 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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