There has been a controversy about whether information should be shared as much as possible in different areas. Some people believe that certain information should be shared with a price.
There is a main reason why people think that sharing information will be beneficial to our world. With easier access to the information, people will be able to making more progress on both scientifically and academically speaking, even in the business world. For example, if a country have no information barriers for the foreign investors, they might be more likely to invest their money in this country. Because they can make prospective on their company’s revenue depends on the real data. So it is rational for a country, especially a developing country, to provide information as much as possible for the foreign investors.
But it is also reasonable for other people who want to limit the free usage of certain information. Some information, for instance, a new technology of rocket, which might cost their owner a large sum of money, can not be share freely. Those information is the property of the owner, so it might be used by other people with certain price.
From my point of view, there will be certain positive effect on sharing information. Due to the fact that it is the key to thrive our economic , also in other area like scientific and academic world. However, in the modern society, information can be an asset and it is owner’s right to impose fee on it.
- Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people believe that students should only concentrate on the subject which will benefit to their career life. From my point of view, alternative subjects can also be important and schools should pay attention on these subjects. 56
- The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'Those informations'?
Suggestion: This information; Those informations
... sum of money, can not be share freely. Those information is the property of the owner, so it mig...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed by other people with certain price. From my point of view, there will be cer...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hat it is the key to thrive our economic , also in other area like scientific and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.932 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8796541558 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1793104379 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325259928589 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124643617109 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846772229134 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214733899942 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745490570291 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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