The graphs below show information about citizenship in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph describes the number of immigrants who were granted uk citizenship between 1962 and 2002, and the bar chart outlined the information about the distribution of those people origin from 1996 to 2002.
Generally, there is a significant rise in the number of immigrants who obtained uk citizenship with the majority came from Asia.
Specifically, in 1962, 20,000 people were issued uk citizenship. The figure increased to 39,000 in the preceded ten years before dropping to 30,000 in 1982, and finally reached 50,000 in 1992. that number rocketed to 110,000 in the following ten years.
Regarding a breakdown in the origin of uk’s new citizens, the data compared in two particular years (1996 and 2002). As can be seen from the chart, Asian accounted for the most with 49,000 immigrants to the uk in 1996 then followed by europe and africa, both were 9,000 and the least was from america, australasia and others. After six years, Asia was still the continent with the most immigrant to the uk, but the figure climbed noticeably by nearly 10,000. The figure of africa and europe were also rose to 25,000 and 27,000 respectively. However, that number whose origin was america, australasia and others declined by 1,000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...82, and finally reached 50,000 in 1992. that number rocketed to 110,000 in the follo...
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Line 13, column 505, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...e figure of africa and europe were also rose to 25,000 and 27,000 respectively. Howe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07804878049 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65952543704 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8287320322 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863124551608 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390446720583 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485033156094 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715873894018 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519588942338 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.