Some people believe that students should only concentrate on the subject which will benefit to their career life. From my point of view, alternative subjects can also be important and schools should pay attention on these subjects.
The reason why alternative courses play a vital role in student’s life are varied. From one point, these courses are not aiming at teaching utilise knowledge for them, instead, it is for their physical health, which is essencial to their study life. For example, PE class will have a positive effect on students’ eye-sight since it provides time for them to enjoy sunshine and exercise. Furthermore, it has been proved that music and painting classes are able to incent students’ imagination and creation. These skill sets is also important in their career life, especially the creativity skill. It will help them to reach better jobs, or even build up their own companies. Thus it will be rational for schools to arrange extra curriculum.
However, the compulsory courses will provide the knowledge which is the foundation of their career life. These courses provide the basic knowledge of all the prospective career for students, for instance, some students who want to be scientists will have to work on math and physic, while future writers will have to pay attention on literature. Thus, parents and schools consider these are the most important courses of the high school education.
In conclusion, students’ schooling should be focus on both compulsory courses and alternative courses, since both of them had profound effects on their welfare.
- The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people believe that students should only concentrate on the subject which will benefit to their career life. From my point of view, alternative subjects can also be important and schools should pay attention on these subjects. 56
- Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 63
- Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 690, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
..., or even build up their own companies. Thus it will be rational for schools to arra...
^^^^
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focused', 'focussed'?
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...ion, students' schooling should be focus on both compulsory courses and alternat...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30593607306 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84547803931 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9904696416 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275073309326 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10669142336 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482423990975 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187907427486 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282964066219 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.