A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
it is widely argued that the internet is of the greatest innovation throughout human history. Personally, I partly agree with this viewpoint because I believe that other discoveries also play the same role as the internet.
On the one hand, I would argue that the internet is essential in various ways. Firstly, it enables people to stay connected with each other regardless of distance. For example, students all around the world can take advantage of distance learning educational programs or businessmen can do video conferencing with international colleagues and partners. Secondly, the internet is as an enormous source of knowledge where people can look up any information using searching tools like Google or Wikipedia and even exchange data on Drive or Cloud. Finally, the internet gives birth to other vital inventions such as E-commerce like Amazon or Ebay and social networking sites which revolutionize people’s communication.
On the other hand, I also maintain that there are other inventions which carry the same weight as the internet. First of all, electricity is the prerequisite of the internet as without the electricity, the internet would not have been invented. it also has a role to play in any industrial operation. Besides, thanks to the advent of technological breakthroughs like computers, tablets or laptops, smart phones, the internet can become widely used. Moreover, while the internet makes our lives easier, medical advances like medicines or vaccines help save millions of people’s lives from fatal diseases. An example can be seen in vaccines for preventable sickness like flu or measles.
In conclusion, the internet gives us enormous benefits; however, other discoveries are equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64074074074 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02859939017 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0733688614 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0419540805484 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0153334257173 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259003613847 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330488975137 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019670464559 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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