Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, a lot of people do what they want to do on a by time. There are several reasons that they enjoy a weekend with their hobby. A priority of a folk’s life is an entertainment rather than working. Moreover, it is obvious that many people feel happy when they execute the hobby-plan which is their favorite activities. Therefore, I agree that men today have some time with their enjoyment-doing activities.
First and foremost, a fact that a person focus on the by time is because his or her priority is playing rather than working. Working hard, people may be stressed out and concede their important work as a minor element of the life. In addition, if they enjoy an entertainment time, they can be addicted with the hobby. Hence, I do assent the claim that a number of people usually use their life with the enjoyment-doing activities.
Another reason that folks overuse the life with playing is happiness. Basically, men feel overwhelmed while they enjoy the moment through the hobby. It explains why people spend the time on private favorite activity. They wish to be happy and fun physically or mentally. For example, my friend do clothes-shopping every day in a mall. She does not work anymore. She loses her job because of debt from overshopping. However, she is always happy since she is still buying expensive clothes. It proves that people are happy when they do what they want to do. Consequently, I support the idea that people spend their time on the hobbies.
To sum up, a person’s priority and desire for being enjoyable let him or her do favorite activities on the free-time. Nowaday, numerous men start thinking their happiness and not the future. I believe this thought make people concentrate on the enjoyment-doing activity. For these reasons, I think that people taday use too much time on personal entertainment activities they want to do rather than doing work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92901234568 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86206817399 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5243762053 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4347826087 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435229757284 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131919257845 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125461724235 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310200015699 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443350594109 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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