Nowadays, teachers' are of responsibility is likely to regard to children's social skills and ability to acquire and apply knowledge, rather than their family. This essay will discuss benefits and drawbacks of this issue and give possible solutions.
Workload of the teachers is heavily influenced by teaching the subject for students, finding out new talents of children and plan the associative curriculum and syllabus for them. On the one hand, it is definitely the main role of teachers and is the criteria that distinguish students' capacity and skills of studying. Moreover, today's society itself requires a high level of intelligence and IQ to accomplish the better sophisticated world. Therefore, it is rightful to pay more attention for students' studying as the knowledge is the foremost criteria.
On the other hand, some pupils are suffered from restriction of what they do from their parents. It usually means that most parents tend to put their child under pressure of doing what they wanted to do their child or initially do not pay any attention for their child. Therefore, children become more introverted or pessimistic about learning. In my view point, teenagers are sensitive with verbal attacks and psychological threat. Therefore, teachers also should be involved in pupils' daily life and family situation to put their learning skills apart from pressure and inappropriate attitudes toward them. For example, there is statistical evidence that a fifth of the all children have been child abuse in 2015, and what made me surprised is that a half of those children were hiding this occurrence.
In conclusion, I agree that most teachers are associated with only students, however more and more effects are influenced for students to become component student. They need motivation and encouragement from their both parents and teacher.
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...ny attention for their child. Therefore, children become more introverted or pess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40769230769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87028233978 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.449536589 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366610373032 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105379083243 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808308781365 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194544762825 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641175351868 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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