You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter:
explain why you changed your previous job
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Mahesh,
Sorry, for writing the letter after so many days. Hope your doing fine as well. How are your family members?I am glad to share about my new job details with you. You probably do not know that I recently shifted to new job. Earlier I was working as Senior Executive in Shippers Company. However, I always wished to work in banking industry as it was my core expertise. At present I am working as General manager in DCBC bank.
In fact my new job is even more exiting than my previous one and pay scale increased up to 70%. As my previous experience is in shipping industry higher officials offered me to the post as personal manager exclusively to Overseas costumers. I also like to share with you another good news. I recently purchased triple bedroom house in city outskirts. I am happily inviting you and your family for house warming ceremony which will be the next month. I will send you personal invitation once we fix dates for the function.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ne as well. How are your family members?I am glad to share about my new job detai...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...triple bedroom house in city outskirts. I am happily inviting you and your family...
^
Line 7, column 451, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... ceremony which will be the next month. I will send you personal invitation once ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60115606936 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45753809083 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2118578399 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2307692308 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3076923077 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272110839924 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859276608919 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650137234162 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215615730823 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487371437729 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.