All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
The company works efficiently if the operation of the company is well enough.Company and employee are co-dependent i.e there is no company without the employees and vice-versa.Many of the companies due to lack of the operation inside the company led to shut down.With these many other companies had hired consultants outside to avoid loss in the company.
The company works only if employees work upto to their maximum knowledge and keep the trust in the company.They know about the company more than anyother who is from outside organisation.As the employee spend more time together in office and also with the work experience they know how to operate within themselves and also the organisation.Though the company hires the consultants who know nothing about the organisation and how they operate in the past.Later they get to know about the factors on which the company depends and based on these factors they suggest the ways how to operate that m work or not.For example one of my friend started a own business which initially started with a loss.But rather hiring the consultants he gathered all the workers and started to know all about the company,later together came up with the new solution which made them as a number 1 startup business.Also some of the consultants fake thet they know everything about the company and finally makes the company to vanish completely.
On the contrary sometimes when company is in the jeopardy there requires the aid of the consultants, because they are confined totally to work on how an organisation works.Due to this they know everything about how to operate company.For instance many companies at the time of critical situations hire some consultants to get the company out of the problem.For example when my uncle's company was at loss and employee were at stake we hired consultants from KAB consultants.They recovered but we can't refute the fact they demanded more money.These consultants are considered good at some situations where there is no cooperation from the employees.
Thus,the situations that demand either the aid from the consultants or listening to the employeesto make the company operate well.As the operation of the company is vital there should be some decision makers to decide whether to hire consultants or listen to employees.Also the cooperation and trust among the employee makes the organisation excel in the present world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1641025641 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04716917379 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464102564103 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 23.0359550562 421% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 270.789009194 60.3974514979 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 503.5 118.986275619 423% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.5 23.4991977007 415% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 5.21951772744 393% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408668119123 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273669026923 0.0831039109588 329% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029556959855 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273669026923 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029556959855 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.6 14.1392134831 365% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -35.44 48.8420337079 -73% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.3 12.1743820225 347% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.48 8.38706741573 137% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 11.2143820225 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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